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Post by Dizzy on Jun 4, 2009 3:54:01 GMT
i don't know..... sounds too easy to explain away
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Post by Shell on Jun 4, 2009 4:11:27 GMT
LOL. Like i said to you in msn. No one (well one other person other then me) KNOWS who the last chapter is on or about. Whos to say that it isnt Bryon aged to his death bed? Or is it Hope aged and gone off the rails because she is an orphan. OR it could be the first chapter to the new story.... Guess you will jsut have to wait and see. I was just trying to show that Bryon has moved on with life and he will never forget his first love. Simone was a big part of his life, and now in a small way, is also part of him. Though if you still want to hold a candle for Simone, then who am i to dash that hope.
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Post by Kate on Jun 5, 2009 9:28:50 GMT
Firstly, I feel the need to keyboard smash at the reappearance of this story: GISHGUIERGJAEHNRGUILAEHRUIGHGKSEH!!!!!1 Shell, you have no idea how big a smile I had on my face when you told me you were finishing this. I always love reading your stories, and I am so happy that BA finally gets a conclusion. So here we go, prepare yourself for a massive comment (had a quick re-read, am commenting from chap 46 onwards, jeez it's going to take me a while)!! I am bringing my own relation to Simone in chapter 46 in here, for reasons I'm not sure of but I read it and thought of myself. When she dyed her hair from red to brown, I couldn't help but associate with her as that's exactly what I've done recently. After having red hair for over a year, I took the jump earlier this week and went back to dark brown again. As soon as I'd done it (I bitched a bit to myself as it came out a bit dark, was hoping it would come out lighter), I felt like Kate again. Hehehe, clichéd! As of chap 49, Byron certainly is an unwell chappy Can't believe he can't bring himself to give Simone another chance! In my eyes people can sometimes deserve a second chance, although things are not always the same a second time around. Hope he is ok! Chap 50: Wow, poor guy, what a long coma. So glad Simone was there to see him waking up. Jackson is such a good friend, I really like him. He says the right things at the right time Chap 51: OH GOD I hope Simone and the baby are ok!! Chap 52: Baby Hope is adorable! I have a bad feeling about Simone giving Bryon one of her kidneys though... I know baby Hope will always have someone to look after her if something happens to Simone, but it's not the same as having her mummy Chap 56: Those pictures of the two of them lying next to one another in surgery are so sweet. The unspoken between them both says a lot. Can't believe he asked her to marry him! OMG WHAT. SHE IS DEAD??! Just when I thought (and Bryon too) she was fine??! NOOOO SHELL!!! Chap 57: That picture of Bryon with puffy red eyes really got to me, it's so sweet yet so heartbreaking at the same time! Two years later, Bryon has a new woman... ohhh it's all mysterious that we don't get to see her face!! Why don't we get to see her face??! What's going on??! Ohhhh am I going to have to become another member of the suspicious CF party??! Loved the updates Shell, spent a good hour plus reading through BA. Your story (and stories for that matter) is/are excellent as always! P.S. Apologies for the long comment
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Post by Shell on Jun 6, 2009 0:00:23 GMT
LOL love the keyboard smash LOL (hope its still alive hehe) and dont apologies for the long message, as not being here while the story was been posted and unable to comment should mean a long message LOL (ok that didn't make sense).
Thank-you so much for the comment about my stories, that means a lot to me!
Chap 50: About Jack: Yeah i like him too, his is one of my favs (though not my first fav LOL) i think thats why i have him in the stories so much.
Chapter 56: thanks for the comment on the pic. Though it annoyes me as i would hav loved to have them on literally looking at each other, holding hands. Ahh well some things are just impossible with the sims. But thanks for the comment anyway, you saw what i was trying to portray. hehe he has always loved her and he felt like it was the right time to do it..go figure?! Sorry but..yes...she is gone (though no one is believing that). Like i said she took a big risk, she then suffered from that risk. (I miss her too, i fell in love with Simone).
Chapter 57: Thanks again for seeing what i was trying to portray in the pic, you said it all.
two years later: LOL you didnt see her face cause i liked surprises and like to generate discussion (guess i have done that LOL). What is it with everyone and seeing her face LMAO But like Dizzy (and others i am assuming) if you want to hold a candle for Simone, who am i to destroy that for you. But the same questions apply to you ask they did to Broken... Seth heard one that heard the doctors declare time of death in Simone's room, how do you explain that one? If she is 'alive' then who in the hell is Bryon sleeping with?? (dont forget he was very much in love with Simone and wanted to marry her). And why would Bryon feel its so important to visit the graveyard every sat if it isnt Simone laying there?
Thanks for taking the time out to read it. And once again dont worry for the long comment, i added another of my own anyway LOL
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Post by Kate on Jun 6, 2009 18:53:52 GMT
If she is 'alive' then who in the hell is Bryon sleeping with?? (dont forget he was very much in love with Simone and wanted to marry her). And why would Bryon feel its so important to visit the graveyard every sat if it isnt Simone laying there? Perhaps it is a... Bryon is under the impression that it's Simone laying in the ground there, but what if it's not? Simone could have faked her own death, for reasons I can't really think of right now? I certainly do love to imagine the impossible
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Post by Shell on Jun 7, 2009 4:42:51 GMT
LMFAO so you are saying that somehow Simone saw something and had to go into witness protection, had her death staged and the doctors watched for Seth, knowing that he would hear their call and tell Bryon LMAO. And to top it off she left behind her brand new baby (who is now 2 years old). LAFFS....very dramatic LAFFS (sounds like home and away) ROFL
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Post by Kate on Jun 7, 2009 7:53:17 GMT
LMFAO so you are saying that somehow Simone saw something and had to go into witness protection, had her death staged and the doctors watched for Seth, knowing that he would hear their call and tell Bryon LMAO. And to top it off she left behind her brand new baby (who is now 2 years old). Maybe... I am just tightly holding onto the tiniest speck of hope, y'know!!! Hehehehehehhehehe
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Post by ~!_Broken_!~ on Jun 7, 2009 21:28:39 GMT
LOL Shell I wasn't being grumpy UPDATE THOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Shell on Jun 8, 2009 0:26:41 GMT
LOL @ Kate yeah i know. I miss her to.
Sorry Broken, i am working on that update. Just with sims 3 out (yay LOL) and having the last assignments for uni to do, its sucking away time....and i am using them as an excuse cause its the last chapter and i want everyone to beg for it ROFLMAOOOO. So when i get a chance i will be splitting it into two (since its mega huge) to tease you all..Yeah i know i could have made it two chapters, but it wouldn't have worked..it needs to stay One chapter..eh..you will see...
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Post by ~!_Broken_!~ on Jun 12, 2009 5:05:47 GMT
Update damnit! ARGIES!!! LOL
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Post by Dizzy on Jun 12, 2009 5:19:24 GMT
lol.... ditto Broken! *please*
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Post by Shell on Jun 12, 2009 7:30:31 GMT
LMFAOO...now that's begging LAFFS I can do an update after Monday! Cause then i am free from assignments (YAY!) and cause i promised someone that has gone camping (and who is reading this story) that i wouldn't till she got back. Though saying that i can doesn't mean i will LOL. So there is still more time for bribery or begging LOL
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Post by Piñacolada on Jun 12, 2009 21:29:45 GMT
Shellll!!!!
Am bacckkkk!! Missed last update coz I have been tied to a table trying to write reports and do assessments for the last 2 weeks.. and it's been rubbish!
I need to know what happens!!
Conspiracy theory or not??!
I think you should update to make me feel better about having too much work to do still *sniffle*
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Post by Shell on Jun 13, 2009 4:52:23 GMT
awww....i feel for you Colada and since you were nice enough to let me use your self sim i will be posting up the first half of the chapter later tonight...so stay tuned LOL. (hope it will make you feel better LOL)
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Post by Kate on Jun 13, 2009 7:46:50 GMT
*bounces on thread* Update update update please please please??! ;D
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Post by Shell on Jun 13, 2009 8:23:54 GMT
Update has arrived LOL I want to say that even though Katie/Colada was nice enough to lend me her self sim and i am every greatful for that (Thanks again Colada), i want to point out the 'Katie' in this story is in NO way like the Katie/Colada of real life. The character in this story is just that, a character and Katie's self sim is playing the part for me. With that said... Chapter Fifty-eight Katie watched the bed room door close behind her boyfriend of a year, listing to him on the phone trying to sort out another work emergency as he left. She stretched out naked under the covers of his Egyptian cotton sheets, she called out her good-byes as she waited for the front door to close. She didn’t love him, but he was worth it. She didn’t mind that she had to give up her body for him, as he would be her step up in the world. Katie was one of the worlds top models, though for Katie it wasn’t enough. She wanted to be the worlds best. But that spot went to the famous Ruby Lovell (now Wolfe). Katie was jealous of Ruby and all that she had achieved in her life. Katie wanted all that and more for herself so had decided long ago that she would do what ever it took to take Ruby’s title. Of course Katie was beautiful and very unique in her looks, that’s what gave her the edge over most models, so she didn’t understand why Ruby still had the title. As Katie saw Ruby as beautiful yes, but just like every common model. Hearing the front door finally close Katie threw back the covers and made her way to the bathroom for a shower. As she let the warm water run over her body she thought about the mornings events. He wasn’t a bad lover, but he was in love with someone else. Even though she herself wasn’t in love with him, it annoyed her that some other girl could occupy his thoughts. She vowed from the start to make him forget her. She had to, for her career, or she would just be back to where she started. Leaving the shower Katie dried herself off and put on the clean clothes she had brang with her and headed out to the kitchen and made herself a coffee. There was a paper lying on the table. Katie just looked at it and rolled her eyes, she wasn’t ever really into that kind of news. Looking down at it, she noticed a crazed man, with dark looks on the front cover and found herself thinking he was cute. With a sigh she though no more of the paper or the man with evil in his eyes and the madding look on his face. She took a sip of her coffee before putting it down on top of the picture. She put her chin in her hands, sighed and let her mind wander to why her boyfriend never wanted her to come with him on Saturday mornings. Guess she just had to work harder and offer her body more she thought with a sigh, he had to give in eventually….right? (to be continued....)
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Post by Piñacolada on Jun 13, 2009 9:34:53 GMT
Yayyy updattteee! Thanks Shell, it did make me feel better Even though I appear to be evil!! Lol. Wonder what me selfie is going to get up to!!
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Post by Shell on Jun 14, 2009 1:35:23 GMT
awww..i am glad colada, good luck with your reports! And your sim isn't evil and neither are you...its just the character she played for me that is. And to find out the question/comment about what you will get up to next will just have to wait LOL
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Post by Kate on Jun 14, 2009 9:23:00 GMT
*huff puff* Can't say I approve of her only using Bryan for a step up in the world! But I'm glad we all finally know who it was in bed with him, hehehe Am slightly curious as to who this "crazed man with dark looks" is!! Just when the identity of one mysterious character is solved, another one has to come along!! Can't wait to read the next part Shell
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Post by Shell on Jun 14, 2009 10:10:34 GMT
LOL thanks for the comment Kate, even if it left you huffy LOL And Katie (character sim, not real Katie) would do anything to get her to where she wants to be. The only thing she would rule out would be killing or murder. But thats it, everything else she would do. And well as you saw above...i mean nothing!
And the guy in the news paper, the one that's bad news....you have all met him before. You should all know him well, just think outside the box *grins*
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