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Post by Shell on Apr 13, 2006 6:44:15 GMT
'Fabulous ' story *lol* No seriously, it looks good. Cant wait to read more
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Post by Dizzy on Apr 13, 2006 6:50:23 GMT
On good start! You've got me hooked!!
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Post by ProLoser on Apr 13, 2006 6:55:45 GMT
Great start, I'm hooked - definately wanna read more. And hey - the spork is a GOOD invention! lol
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Post by Dizzy on Apr 13, 2006 7:03:10 GMT
Is it a fork or is it a spoon!! AHH It blows my mind!!! Yes all schizophrenic eating utensils are great!! *LOL* ;D
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Post by DejAng3l on Apr 13, 2006 7:16:42 GMT
great start........i really like it.....but beware.........there are lots of bloodthirsty avid story readers around that will be demanding for updates on a daily basis.....
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Post by Kate on Apr 13, 2006 7:20:22 GMT
Aw, cool! Sporks! I really liked the first part, can't wait for more!
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Post by listerino on Apr 13, 2006 8:08:29 GMT
Sounds promising! Keep it coming
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Post by ~!_Broken_!~ on Apr 13, 2006 12:07:55 GMT
oooo I like where this is going cause I get a feeling Daddy will kick her out on her ass lol and thus begins a 1 gen challenge? hehe
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Post by wizzy853 on Apr 13, 2006 12:17:27 GMT
nice story & name
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Post by hawkeye on Apr 13, 2006 14:27:38 GMT
wow O.O this totally reminds me of Prince Charming for some reason......
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Post by breena on Apr 13, 2006 15:35:56 GMT
but beware.........there are lots of bloodthirsty avid story readers around that will be demanding for updates on a daily basis..... Uhhh, that would be me Dejang3l was talking about! LOL, I won't stalk you everyday, maybe every few days! Very nice start, moooooorrrrreeeee Please! ;D
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Post by islandprincess on Apr 14, 2006 1:23:57 GMT
good update i am hooked already
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Post by DejAng3l on Apr 14, 2006 4:42:45 GMT
I don't mean just you breena.......LOL.........i'm including myself in that categories as well......*LMAO*........I'm one of the main story stalkers.........but don't worry......i usually just follow the lead of other protestors...........LOL
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Post by The Moon & Antarctica on Apr 14, 2006 4:48:47 GMT
lol @ Broken - making predictions already? Although that would be REALLY funny!
Great start! This is looking like one of those stories that I am going to have to follow!
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misscoolness2365
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Post by misscoolness2365 on Apr 15, 2006 0:45:16 GMT
Update coming tonight or tommorrow! Stay tuned!:afro:
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Post by The Moon & Antarctica on Apr 16, 2006 7:11:52 GMT
OOH!!! Exciting! *stays tuned...*
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Post by Kate on Apr 16, 2006 8:19:58 GMT
Oooh! Okie doke! *sets up camp*
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Post by wizzy853 on Apr 16, 2006 21:01:29 GMT
Um......... she posted that 2 days ago... but , I'll still wait!
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Post by LadySwig on Apr 17, 2006 7:50:32 GMT
Ah I want an update, this story seems really nice
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misscoolness2365
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Post by misscoolness2365 on Apr 17, 2006 23:29:57 GMT
On most days, you can find Daddy at his computer, working. He tells me that he is trying to work out the kinks on his latest invention, a combination knife and fork, which he calls the “Knork”. Yeah, sometime I wonder about his sanity. Lately, though, he has been going out every night, dressed to the nines. What the hell? He did not even ask me to buy him new clothes. Maybe he is just trying to negotiate a business deal for the "Knork". Anyway, he went out every night the last past month, and he did not even argue when I bought a new bathing suit that was on the skimpy side. When I returned home from school and shopping, my dad’s assistant, Savannah, was in the kitchen cooking. That is somewhat strange, because we normally go out to eat or order takeout. “Fab, dinner will be ready in a couple of minutes! Tell your dad to wash up.” Dad was in his bedroom, looking in the mirror and primping. “Wow, Dad, you look ultra hot tonight! What’s the occasion?” “Fab, what do you think of Savannah?” “I think she’s ok. You know, she helps me with my girl probs.” Savannah has worked for Dad for about eight years now. She helped Dad turn the company from deep in debt to an endless source of income. She is very smart and sweet, too. I could talk to her about anything that I could not tell Daddy. If she were not Dad’s assistant, she would be perfect wifey material. But, we all know, that would never happen. Dinner that night was extremely strange. Dad and Savannah was acting very strange. They were flirting all night. I was about to gag when Dad started to tell me something. “Fab, you know that I have been working a whole lot lately. I haven’t been able to enjoy life since Carlotta died. I don’t know how to tell you this, but I think I might have found the one and she has been under my nose all of these years.” “Dad, what the hell are you saying?” “Fab, well, I am in love with Savannah and she will be moving in with us.” Before Daddy could continue, I excused myself from the table. After taking a shower and putting on my pj’s, I started to think about Dad and Savannah together. He has been happy the last couple of weeks, but I know that Savannah would take his attention and Dad's money away from me. So that night, I decided the bitch has got to go.
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