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Post by Kate on Aug 4, 2006 21:11:23 GMT
I don't know.
You did some weird rambling in my thread, so I did some in return! ;D
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Post by ♥The one called Onie on Aug 4, 2006 21:12:22 GMT
Oh lol okie dokie.... cool :sly:
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Post by hawkeye on Aug 4, 2006 22:14:28 GMT
3 pages of comments makes me look late...nice update Kate, BRING MORE!!
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Post by listerino on Aug 5, 2006 0:39:04 GMT
Great update
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Post by Shell on Aug 5, 2006 0:42:16 GMT
good upate Kate....*demands more soon*
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Post by Antilife on Aug 5, 2006 2:52:08 GMT
Wonderful update, kate. I can't wait for another one. That maddie girl reminds me of someone I know. So, I thinki I'lll be able to get a good picture of her in my mind. oh and :update:
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Post by Kate on Aug 5, 2006 11:14:23 GMT
Hehe, thank you guys! *sends loads of :hug:'s and :cookie:'s your way!*
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Post by Kate on Aug 9, 2006 14:30:09 GMT
This chapter is dedicated to everyone who is reading - thank you for doing so! I hope you're all enjoying it! You might notice Andrew (Mr. Evil Boss Guy) has had a make-over! This is because of him being too similar to Bryon from Shell's story! He's had a sudden hair cut now... hehe! Don't forget, this next chapter is a flashback! Enjoy! ^_^
CHAPTER FOUR ~ FLASHBACK. [/u] [/center] “ Madeline, clean the tables! Madeline, make that coffee faster! Madeline, wash that mug again!” Madeline muttered under her breath, mocking her manager Andrew. She was stood in the back room of the Café, washing several mugs that she’d just collected. “Arrrrgh, Madeline will shove this dish cloth in your gob if you don’t stop bossing her around so much and just freaking shut up…” “MADELINE!” She winced as she heard Andrew shriek her name. “Madeline, GET OUT HERE! There is a customer wanting to be served!” Madeline threw her cloth against the wall, watching as it fell down onto the counter next to the sink. She growled. “Why can’t you bloody serve them yourself? You fucking lazy arse…” Madeline stormed out of the back room, pushing past a naïve, petite blonde girl who immediately fell straight to the floor. Not worrying to check to see if the girl was okay, Madeline walked on, heading out into the main part of the Café. She shot Andrew a sarcastic smile as she took her place behind the cash register, looking down at the keypad. “Hi,” Madeline mumbled monotonously, “What can I get you?” “A friendly smile would be nice,” The customer facing her announced, and as she looked up she realised who it was. “Hi, Mads.” “Jonah!” she declared, her expression brightening. “Hiya, what are you doing here? Natalie hasn’t been in yet, if you’re looking for her…” “No, no!” Jonah insisted, “Actually… I was hoping to talk to you. Have you got a spare ten minutes?” “Oh, I wish I had. I took my break earlier…” Madeline groaned, the corners of her mouth curving into a pout. “Mr. Tight Arse behind me probably won’t let me go on a another break…” “MADELINE!” “Speak of the devil…” “MADELINE!” Andrew repeated, bounding over to the empty spot next to her. He leaned into her and she winced angrily as she felt his clammy breath on her neck. “I don’t pay you to chat; serve this guy for crying out loud!” Madeline rolled her eyes. “Oh sod it.” She declared under her breath before turning to Andrew, putting her hands behind her back to untie her apron. “I’m going on my break!” she announced firmly, watching as his face flashed thunder. “You will do no such thing!” Andrew growled through gritted teeth, “You are staying right here!” Madeline grinned widely. “Watch me.” With that, Madeline ripped her apron from around her face before throwing it at Andrew, shrieking ‘HA!’ as it hit him in the face. She stomped round to the other side of the counter, grabbing Jonah’s arm and pulling him towards a two-seater table. Once they’d sat down, Madeline looked expectedly at Jonah. “Well…?” she declared, “What’s up?” “Well!” Jonah cleared his throat before reaching up to rub his eyes, slightly surprised by the incident he’d just observed. “Natalie and I… it’s our third anniversary on Monday. I’ve booked a table for the both of us at ‘The Boardwalk’, our favourite restaurant.” Jonah clasped his hands together, as if making a praying gesture. “I need someone to trick her into thinking she’s going to the opera or something, so she’d dress up…” Madeline’s eyes widened. “The opera? Jesus, why would she want to go there?” “I don’t know,” Jonah sighed, shrugging his shoulders. “Say something along those lines. Do you think you could you do it for me? I want it to be a surprise… I’m guessing at the moment she thinks I’ve forgotten our anniversary, seeing as I haven’t mentioned anything.” “Ok,” Madeline agreed, giving Jonah a warm smile. “I’ll do it. Just so you know I’m not particularly good at keeping secrets…” She watched as Jonah took a gulp. “But I’ll try my best seeing as you’re Natalie’s boyfriend. I know just what’ll say to her…”[/font]
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Post by ♥The one called Onie on Aug 9, 2006 14:58:01 GMT
w00t Kate update! I knew he was doing something good! ... boo... drama rocks!
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Post by hawkeye on Aug 9, 2006 15:23:32 GMT
I love the last pic w/ andrew in the backround glaring at Mads. nice update I still want your grapics card *reaches*
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Post by Kate on Aug 9, 2006 18:09:37 GMT
Onie: Thank you And I know you like a bit of drama... but hey, the drama comes later! Hawkeye: Hehe, I'm glad someone noticed that! I was originally going to take a plain ole' shot of Jonah, but then I came up with the idea and thought, 'Hey... that would be cool!'. ;D Thank you, and nuh-uh! *clings onto own computer*
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Post by Angie on Aug 9, 2006 18:41:49 GMT
lol....I love this story!!!! And I like Andrews new haircut! Cute!
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Post by listerino on Aug 9, 2006 20:19:24 GMT
Lol I'm with Hawkeye I loved Andrew looking all mad in the background. Classic! Great update
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Post by Dizzy on Aug 9, 2006 20:54:19 GMT
Awwww, how sweet!! Humm, but I wonder if Madelaine keeps the secret :scratchchin: The last time we saw her in current times she was grinning big time and Natalie.
And I think Madeline needs this sign :kissass: for her boss! ;D
Want more, want more!!!! :cookie:
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Post by Kate on Aug 9, 2006 21:00:16 GMT
Angie: Thank youuu! :smooch: I like Andrew's new hair cut too, sexysexyboy!
List: Hehe, I'm glad you liked that too! Thank youuu! :hug:
Dizzy: Oh, it's a 'will she won't she'! ;D Jonah knows that she's not too good at keeping secrets, but she did say she'd try... what a predicament!
I think Mads needs that sign too. I could see her then telling him to stick it up his ass afterwards.
More soon! :rose:
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Post by Dizzy on Aug 9, 2006 21:05:56 GMT
Oh and I forgot to mention how good Andrew look with the new hair cut! He looks so different, it's amazing how much the hair can change it.
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Post by Kate on Aug 9, 2006 21:07:48 GMT
When I first put that hair on him I was like this: (except there was a lot of dribble on my desk afterwards)
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Post by Dizzy on Aug 9, 2006 21:11:42 GMT
lol...... *hands Kate a mop*
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Post by The Moon & Antarctica on Aug 9, 2006 21:12:48 GMT
WOW
I just read the whole thing and it looks really good! I'm still wondering what exactly the "dirty little secret" is, but... I'll guess that'll have to wait! lol
Very nice job, I'm looking forward to more updates!
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Post by Kate on Aug 9, 2006 21:16:29 GMT
Thank you Diz, it's a bit late but I'll save it for later use. 'Ami: Thank youu muchly! :smooch: You'll find out what the title means as we get into the story... it takes a while to get going, but it does eventually... (well, it will when I get writing that bit!)
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