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Post by Antilife on May 25, 2006 13:59:36 GMT
Well, i do have an afro. :afro: :afro: :afro: waoaoaoaoaoaoa.
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Post by Angelis Da Muso on May 25, 2006 15:25:57 GMT
lol i want MORE ........i reckon he likes the friend ( tosha) and is trying to use her to get to her friend ..... but i could be worng and he might really like her and wanna get to know more of the 1st person mhe meet at school :angel: :angel: :angel: :angel: :angel: 5 angels out of 5 i liked it .... i hope to see more soon... i got a bit confused as to who lives with her and her family and stuff but yeah other than that i love it keep up the good work ...:>:>:>
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Post by Antilife on May 26, 2006 23:56:21 GMT
K, another update! I'm gann try and get another ton ight if possible, or tomarrow morinin. Please comment.Chap. 4: The night to remmeber It was now Saturday and I couldn’t wait to see Mikey, I was cooling my heels playing pool with my dad, when his watched beeped. “Ok, it’s now 5:40. You wanted me to tell you to start getting ready now. So go.” He said. “Thanks, daddy!” I squealed and kissed his cheek. I ran upstairs amd started flipping threw my clothes. “NO! No! no. Darn where did I put it? Ah, that’s right.” I sad and pulled back the clothes n my closet revealing a gleaming dress inside a glass case. “I love my closet!” I said, and laid the dress on the bed. I walked over to my vanity and put on my make-up, then I put on my dress and inspected myself in the mirror. “There’s still something missing. Hmmmmmm, oh yes!” I sreamed and walked back over to the vanity and did my hair. Then I walked back over to the mirror, “Now I’m satisfied.” At that moment Gwen walked in, “Did your father buy that dress for you?” She asked. “Yep, just yesterday, there wasn’t anything else I could possibly wear!” I told her. “Well, so you know, he’s downstairs!” She said. “Really! Oh my, hoe do I look gwen?” I asked. “Stuning dear!” She said. I scurried to the top of the stairs past her, ans when I saw mikey he was wearing jeans and a t-shirt!!! “What are you wearing!!!” I called out. “What are yo wearing?” he asked, “Were going bowling. Uh-oh I had completely forgot. I’m so stupid!! “Umm, well this is awkward.” Gwen said, “Mikey, right? Will you excuse us for a few?” “Ofcourse!” He said. I walked back to my room, embarrised. “I can’t believe I did that.” I said as we walked in. “It’s ok, dear.” She said sympathetically. When I had changed, I walked over to the top of the stairs to see mikey and my parents talking. This couldn’t be good. I cleared my throat and they looked up. When I was at the bottom my mother whispered “He seems like a nice boy.” I gave her a small smile, and me and mikey walked out the door. “She’ll be fine dear.” He father said to my mother. “I’m not worried.” She said. “I am.” Gwen said. My parents both looked at her in confusion.
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Post by Shell on May 27, 2006 0:00:25 GMT
why was Gwen worried about her
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Post by Angelis Da Muso on May 28, 2006 14:44:07 GMT
hahaha i have done that b4 ... i was going ice skating and i put on a signlet top and a skirt .... i saw my date walking down the drive and ran back to my room b4 any one noticed... great update sorry i didnt comment sooner there was a couple of spelling mistakes but its kwl ... i do them all the time .... When do we soon more???
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Post by *~LadyWaterLilly~* on May 28, 2006 16:19:09 GMT
Oooh, I wanna Find out Why Gwen is worried. Great Update.
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Post by Kate on May 28, 2006 21:40:27 GMT
LOL, Jessica's T-shirt actually gave me the urge to check my e-mail... so I did!
And I want to know why Gwen is worried about her, too...
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Post by Antilife on May 28, 2006 21:46:45 GMT
oh god! *wipes tear* You cracked me up there kate. I'll be getting an update tonight. I've been really busy. My mom went to work today and yesterday and my bro's been out of the house alot, so i had to take core of my sister and we had things to do around the house.
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Post by Antilife on May 28, 2006 23:04:26 GMT
Yay! ok I finally got chap. 5 up! it's a little longer. And I hope you guys like it. it won't answer why gwen is worried but I know you guys will still love it!!Chap. 5: falling in love! When we arrived at the bowling alley, I was very nervous. I had never bowled before. Ok, Jessica. It’s just like pool, only completely different. Crap! Great, I agreed to something I didn’t even know how to do and for a whiole didn’t even know that I was even doing it. I’ll let him go first, so I can learn, ok that works. “How about you go first?” I said. “Ok, but I was the one to ask you on a date. So, maybe you should go first……..”He said. “No no no no no!” I said, “I insist.” “Umm, ok.” He said coutiously. Let’s hope he knows enough that I can learn. Once he shot I walked slowly up to my the ball, threw, and covered my eyes to wait for the thunk as it rolled off the side. But, wait!! There was no thunk in fact there was a great clash of pins. When I looked up there were only 2 standing. “Wow! That’s pretty good” Mikey said. Ok, I think I got the hang of this. Let’s hope I get lucky like that more than once. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “You win!” he said. "What!! Really! I can’t believe it!” I yelled. “Yeah……..” he said slowly. “Oh my god! I did it! I can’t believe it!!” I yelled! I guess I was better than I thought. After we had a bite to eat we got in his car and drove back to my place. He walked me up to my front door and he said “I really had a fun time tonight, Jessica.” “I did too.” I said. “I’m glad. Hey you wanna get something to eat tomarrow?” he asked. “Oh I’d love to.’ I said, “Atleaste this time I don’ t have to beat your butt at bowling!” He laughed and said “You’d never believe me if I said that was my second time, would you?” “Oh really? Well you wouldn’t if I said that it was my first?” I said nervous. We both laughed “Well, let’s not do that again.” He said. “Oh please never!” I said and looked down. He laughed and continued. “So, I’ll pick you up at 9:00 p.m.?” he said. “Ok that sounds good!” I said. At that moment I felt sudden urge of shyness towards him and he leaned oh so slowly towards me. And then gave me my first kiss. He let off the kiss after a little while, turned, walked off the porch, got in his car, and gave me a small wave. I waved back still in a daze and watched him drive off. I walked back in the house and started to finally think. Yet, I still felt peaceful and quiet. I wanted to see him again to talk with him to kiss him again. But, I couldn’t I had to wait. Yet the urge was so strong I couldn’t take it. I had never felt this way before it was different. Not to gwen, not to my parents, not to ben, not even to tosha. I think……..I think I’m in love! Please read and comment. Thankyou!! ;D
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Post by Nichole on May 28, 2006 23:08:05 GMT
Ok...I've read the first 3 chapters! First: She's a cutie! Second: Nice Story Third: My name's Nichole.
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Post by Antilife on May 28, 2006 23:17:52 GMT
Thanks! I mgiht have another up by late tonight.
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Post by Nichole on May 28, 2006 23:19:16 GMT
Wow... ur welcome! I remember my first kiss! I just love that outfit! lol
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Post by Antilife on May 28, 2006 23:22:20 GMT
I think o can find out for you. If you want.
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Post by Nichole on May 28, 2006 23:26:58 GMT
I think I already got it..lol I let my friend have my game though...2 years ago! lol
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Post by Dizzy on May 28, 2006 23:39:10 GMT
That is so cute Anti!!!! Awww, Mikey gave her, her first kiss!!! Can't wait to read more and I'm still wondering why Gwen was worried?? *EDIT: And Nichole are you saying you don't have your game and haven't for the last two years!! You poor thing!! :hug:
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Post by Nichole on May 28, 2006 23:58:34 GMT
lol..yes..It's all good! She's my homie & I might be gettin that Open For Business thingie for Christmas.
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Post by Shell on May 29, 2006 0:19:28 GMT
awww...her first kiss..So cute
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Post by Antilife on May 29, 2006 1:26:20 GMT
Thanxs guys! i'll be gettin antother tomarrow. (sorry) Things to do. and laziness to be.
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Post by Kate on May 29, 2006 8:45:25 GMT
Aww, that was so cute! I love it when teens experience their first kiss in game, it's so... well, cute!!! I can't wait for the next part! *dances*
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Post by Antilife on May 29, 2006 13:42:31 GMT
K, another update. it finally tells why gwen is worried. Big fight and i hope you like. it. Chap. 6: Someone worries. “Ok, Jessica, Dish everything!” Tohsa screamed over the phone the next morning. “Well, umm, we went to the bowling alley……” I said. ”Uh- uh” She said. I continued “Ofcourse I didn’t know how to play.” “Oh, wonderful Jessica, mess up the first date.” She cackled “He was new too!” I yelled, a little frustrated. “Yeah, whatever. So, what did you do after that?” She asked. “Well, we ate and he drove me home and well……..” I said nervously. “Yeah?” She asked. “Well, he umm kissed me Tosh.” I said shyly. There was a gap of silence and I could almost see the surprised look on her face. “Tosh you ok?” I asked. “Yeah. Wow Jessica your first kiss. How do you feel? She asked. “I don’t know. I feel different. I think I’m falling for him, Tosh. He’s everything I’ve wanted and more.” I said dreamily. “Well don’t get to cocky Jessica. He may turn differentaly.” She said. “Yeah whatever.” I said still thinking about Mikey. “So, you think he’s ganna ask you to the dance.” She continued. “I’m hoping so.” I said. She laughed. “Well, I’m hoping for you.” “Ok, Tosh I have to go. I’ll talk to you later tonight anf tell you what happened.” I said. “Ok, Jessica. Bye.” She said and hung up. When I was walking through the hallway Gwen stopped me and said. “Jessica, I’d like to talk to you about your new friend, Mikey.” “Ok, but It’s already 11 and I have to be ready by 8 for our date tonight.” I told her. She sighed and motioned for us to sit at the couch. “Well let’s see your friend, Mikey, seems nice and all but I’, getting a bad vibe off of him. He seems like someone who might try to hurt you. I’m just saying.” She told me. “Why would you say that?” I start to raise my temper and continued. “I’m finally happy again after Ben dumped me and now you telling me that Mikey is a bad person?” “Sweety I just don’t want to see you hurt is all. I just think that you might not want to keep yourself open and let yourself become to attached to him, or let him get to close to you. Just take it slow, I may be wrong but it just seems very weird..” She said. “Whatever! I’m still going! Whether you like it or not. I like him, a lot, and I won’t let some ‘feeling’ you have about him ruin me and his friendship.” I yelled at her. “I just don’t want to see you hurt!!” That’s all. T’s my job to protect you. And I want to protect you. You should be listening to me too. How amyn times have I been right before?” She asked “Many times before, but that doesn’t mean that this is one of them!!” I yelled and stormed off upstairs. “Well for your save sweety I hope your right.” She said after I had gone upstars. Comments please. I love them. it's what keeps me going guys.
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