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Post by Piñacolada on May 21, 2006 0:06:07 GMT
:rofl: ok then anti!
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Post by listerino on May 21, 2006 5:59:26 GMT
I like what's up so far. Keep it coming. Cheers, Listerino
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Post by Antilife on May 21, 2006 18:49:25 GMT
hey guys, this is chap. 2. you get to see the new guy and get inside Jessica's head. I love the comments, please keep em comin. I hope you like it!! Oh and this chap. threw chap. 7 will be all flashback. Chap.2: My dream boy! As the bell rang and everyone went to class, I walked up to him and asked what his name was. “ My name is Mikey.” He said shyly. “Cool name! So, what’s your first class?” I asked. “Umm, it says here that I have English with Mr. Harfford.” He told me. “Wow! That’s the same for me too! My name is Jessica by the way.” I said as I saw, out of the corner of my eye, Tosha leave for class. Oh well it gave me more time to talk with mikey. “That’s great, so can you show me the way?” He asked. “Of course!” I said, and shook his hand. We walked along the hallway. As I looked to see hoe cute he was. God! I couldn’t take my eyes off of him. We quickly started a conversation. Mikey told me that he moved from New York, to here. His mother’ job relocates them a lot. His life was so interesting, and he had been to so many places. Unfortunately we had to end our conversation because we had arrived at the door of horror. Mr. Harfford works us to the bone in English. “Your late, miss Bradock.” He said as the bell rang. “Only by a fraction of a second!” I yelled. “Yes, but that second you wasted talking with our new student makes you tarty. So, why don’t you go take this slip of paper and fill it out explaining why you were tarty. While I introduce the rest of the class to Mikey here, right? Since you have already met.” He said shrudely. Mikey, gave me a look of disgusts and I walked over to my desk. Everyother kid was starring at me, but I didn’t care. I stared at mikey and hids beautiful eyes. God we’d make a beautiful couple. Oh did I just think it. Oh well atleaste it’s in my head and not out my mouth. “Did I just hear what I think I heard?” tosha asked. Oh crap……….. K, guys please tell me what you think. I'll try and get another update tonight!
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Post by Dizzy on May 21, 2006 19:29:37 GMT
That is so funny that she actually said what she was thinking and didn't even realize it!! *giggle* I think I've done that before. Humm I wonder if Mikey heard?? Then it would be really embarrassing.
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Post by Antilife on May 21, 2006 23:13:44 GMT
Thanks for the cooment diz. Oh and so you guys know, I' d like for you to not mention the sky in the fourth, and the fact that jessica seems to be the only one at her desk. Shhhhhhh writers error. I was up till 12:30 takin pics, stupid sims. I can tell this story is going to be a bitch.
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Post by Dizzy on May 21, 2006 23:15:29 GMT
Pssst!! Anti I didn't even notice that stuff till you just mentioned it!! I guess I was paying more attention to what you were saying. Humm, but now that you have mentioned the mess ups.......... :rofl:
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Post by *~LadyWaterLilly~* on May 21, 2006 23:18:40 GMT
Nice story, I like it. Mikey kinda scares me though.
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Post by Shell on May 22, 2006 0:04:59 GMT
the teachers is such an A$$..
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Post by Antilife on May 22, 2006 0:07:06 GMT
exactly.
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Post by Antilife on May 22, 2006 2:01:20 GMT
K, here is another update. It'll be the last until friday so be happy!Chap 3: It's a wonderful life! “What did you just say?” Tosha asked/ “umm nothing, nothing at all.” I said nervously. ‘hm-mm. Sure you were.” She said with a cheeky smile. Well atleaste she was the only one that heard me, right? I looked around the room. It seemed everyone was paying attention to what Mr. Harfford had o say about mikey. Ok, so all I have to do is survive English, math, and science, then comes luch where I get to talk with mikey again. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “Wow! He’s hot!” Tosha said as we sat down for lunch. “And it took you this long to say that?” I asked. “Well unlike some people I don’t speak my mind.” She said. “Haha! Very funny.” I said irritated. As we were talking, mikey walked over to us and sat down. Tosha looked over in shock, and I smiled. “So, how was the rest of you day?” He asked. “Good! And you? Did you find the rest of your classes ok? “Real great. So, umm-“ He was cut short by Tosha still starring at him. “Tosha!!!: I yelled and she jumped. “Oh, sorry.” She said embarrised. “So, are you going to introduce me to your friend here?” Mikey asked. “Oh yes, Mikey this is my best friend, Tosha, and tosha this is Mikey.” I told them. “Nice to meet you.” Mikey said. “Nice to meet you too.” She said. He gave her a heart melting smile and she seemed to drift away, little to say if she didn’t know he was my borfriend. And I’d soon find out later tonight. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “Ring! Ring! Ring!” the telephone rang and my mother picked it up. “Hello? Yes. Yes. She’s right here. Ok!” She said and handed it to me, “He says his name is Mikey. I squealed and grabed the phone. “Hello?” I said. “Hey! I just wanted to say that I had a fun time today, meeting you. You were really helpful and a nice friend.” He said. “Aww, Really?” I asked. “Yeah. Hey, I was wondering, would you like to go bowling with me Saturday night?” he asked. “Oh my god, really? I’d love to!” I screamed. “Yep. We can go at 6:00. I’ll pick you up.” He said. ”really! Ok, that sunds great. Well, see you tomarrow then.” I said. “Ok, bye!” He said and hung up. Yay! I have a date with the cutest boy in school. Life was getting good for me. I wonder what I should wear? K, guys i love the comments. The next one will be on friday. I don't have time during the weekday, unfortunately. So, you guys just have to wait. K, love the comments, like I said.
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Post by Shell on May 22, 2006 2:11:33 GMT
So are they going to get togther anti?
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Post by Antilife on May 22, 2006 2:15:06 GMT
Wait till friday!
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Post by ~!_Broken_!~ on May 22, 2006 2:35:31 GMT
good update anti. it's goin kinda slow though..i like it but its slow
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Post by Kate on May 22, 2006 7:13:46 GMT
Mikey actually does have really nice eyes. Great updates, Anti! Keep it coming; I'm interested to know where this story is going!
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Post by Dizzy on May 22, 2006 17:46:40 GMT
Well for saying 'HI' shyly at first he really moves fast!! He's already got a date with her!! :hi5: Can't wait to see what happens on there date.
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Post by islandprincess on May 22, 2006 20:48:28 GMT
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so sweet
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Post by Antilife on May 22, 2006 22:47:29 GMT
Diz pictue yourself being the new kid, meeting someone who greets you very kindly and then being a teenage boy. All those things clikc into ask the girl out.
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Post by Dizzy on May 22, 2006 23:15:52 GMT
*LOL* I guess not being a teenage boy myself, I just didn't get that!!
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Post by Antilife on May 24, 2006 19:01:26 GMT
LOL! Ok, guys i'm ganna try and get one tonight. but, don't expect it. I'm still going to end up sticking to a weekend onl;y thing for a while though. Atleaste until I finish my curiculum.
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Post by Kate on May 25, 2006 7:55:07 GMT
Wow, I did like Dizzy think that he was moving a bit fast, lol! But seeing as both me and Dizzy are both girls I can see why we don't understand as we're not in a teenage boys shoes! OH! I can't wait for the update at the weekend, Anti. I give you afro guy's sign of approval of your story. LOL I don't know, please don't ask, I'm a bit hyper after fixing the boards. Silly little problem, that was...
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