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Post by Shell on Apr 9, 2006 23:15:29 GMT
OMG poor girl! No wonder she killed her family. What pigs!!!! Love this part "I have something to tell you also honey. I'm an undercover cop:. GREAT update Broken!!
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Post by wizzy853 on Apr 9, 2006 23:36:24 GMT
Thanks for naming Alisha, Alisha.. lol. Nice update and how he just gone up and say he an undercover cop? :rolls eyes: Can't wait til updates!
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Post by ~!_Broken_!~ on Apr 10, 2006 1:55:48 GMT
"You're a cop?! And I just told you all of that?! Oh my god! How could you, Chase?!" I screamed. "Honey, did you not just hear my conversation with the Captain?" "Yes! But how am I to know that you won't go and tell him all that I just told you!?" I started to cry. "Holidaye, please calm down." He wrapped his arms around my waist and held me, "I love you, I don't care what you did all those years ago, you were scared and confused, when you did...what you did...you were suffering from temporary insanity. I love you, and I love you even more that you trust me enough to tell me what you did, I won't break that trust by going and running my mouth to my boss. I don't want to lose you over something stupid, you had every right to do what you did, do you understand me? I'm not[/i] going to turn you in, baby girl. Okay?" I sucked in a wavery breath, "Okay. I love you, Chase, thank you for always being there for me." "Anytime, sweetheart. Listen, it's late, let's go to bed," he whispered in my ear as he nuzzled my neck. The next morning Chase and I spoke with Alisha about Moros. "Goodmorning, sunshine!" exclaimed Chase when Alisha came into the living room. "Morning....Daddy...did mommy tell you about that man?" "Yes, sweetheart she did." "Are you going to get a divorce now?" Chase laughed, "No, sweetheart. I love Mommy, very much. You see, that man you saw yesterday? He's trying to hurt us, mainly Mommy. He wants to take you and me away from her." "Why does he want to do that?" "Because I did some bad things when I was younger, sweetie. You see, my parents, your grandparents, and my brothers, your uncles, did some very bad things to me, and the man you saw yesterday helped me make them pay-" I explained. "How did they pay? Like how much money?" Alisha asked, trying to clear up her confusion. "It wasn't money that they payed with, honey. It's just a figure of speach. Moros, the man that was here, he just helped me make it so my family wouldn't hurt me anymore." "Where are they now?" "They..uh..died in a car accident." "Oh..." "But you see, sweetheart, Moros seems to think I need his help again, I don't. He thinks I want to get rid of you and daddy, I don't though. I love you both, very much." "Sweetheart, Mommy and I love you and Molly very very much. We would never let anybody hurt you if we could prevent it, this we can, and will, prevent. I love Mommy and she loves me, she would never cheat on me, and I wouldn't cheat on her. What Moros did to her yesterday was against her will, she didn't want him to kiss her, but she was so scared of him she couldn't stop him from doing it. Do you understand?" "Yes, Daddy," Alisha said quietly. "Good girl. Now, you remember what Mommy and I have told you about not talking to strangers; even if they have lost their puppy or want to give you a piece of candy?" "Yes. I'm not to help them find their puppy or whatever they lost, I'm not to accept candy from them, and if they follow me or try to grab me I'm to start screaming, 'Let go of me, you're not my mommy/daddy!' Right?" "Yes, we're glad you remembered that," I said. "Yes we are, and now that Moros is trying to hurt you, you need to be really careful. If you seem somebody staring at you at recess while you're at school, go and tell a teacher immediately! If somebody keeps bothering you to help them with whatever, and you don't know them, start running away. Alright?" Chase said. "Yes Daddy. I love you, Daddy. I love you, Mommy." Alisha said, then gave each of us a hug.
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Post by ~!_Broken_!~ on Apr 10, 2006 1:57:44 GMT
Time passed and we hadn't heard from Moros. Although he was still on everybody's mind, except for Molly's, we didn't let it spoil our fun. Molly was growing up today and all of us couldn't be happier. We had a small party, just the three of us. She grew up into a very happy child, although, just like Alisha, she inherited her Daddy's sloppiness. She had woofed down 3 pieces of cake before I got through my first one. She followed in her sisters footsteps as well. Soon as she finished her cake, she called the headmaster over for dinner. Thankfully this time, I heard the conversation. Vince Walter came again, I made my lobster just like before and Molly gave him a tour of the house. She received the same score as Alisha, and was welcomed into private school. Mr. Walter decided to hang around for a while longer and speak with Molly, by the end of the night they were best friends. -------------------------------------------- Alisha POV:As I got into bed, I heard a knock at my door. "Come in," I said. In walked, Molly. "Hey, sis! What are you doing up? We have school tommorrow, remember? Your first day of school, and at a private school no less!" "Yeah, I'm just scared is all," She said quietly. The first thought that came into my mind was Moros was in her room or outside her window. "Is somebody in your room, or outside your window sis?" I asked drastically. "No, I'm just scared about starting school." I laughed, relieved, "Oh don't worry 'bout it sis. Just stick with me and you'll be okay. But if somebody comes up to you that you don't know, other than your teachers, just leave okay? Don't even help them if they say they lost their kitten or puppy!" "Why?" "Because they could snatch you up and take you away from us. We don't want you to be snatched up." "Oh, I don't want to be snatched up either." She looked around the room saying, "So, uhm..what do you think of Mr. Walter?" "He's cool, he's like a big kid." "I think he's cute," she said with a giggle. "Eeeeeeeeeeeeww!" I exclaimed. "That's gross, Molly! He's like older than mom and dad!" "I know. But you think that Elvis dude is cute!" "He's also dead." "That's just nasty...you like a dead guy," Molly said, causing us both to burst into a fit of giggles. "Girls, get to bed! Molly go to your own room, you both have school tomorrow!" Yelled Mom and Dad from the hallway. "Okay!" We said in unison. "Well I'd better get to bed. I love you, Alisha! I can't wait for school tomorrow," said Molly as she stood up and headed to her own room. "Love you too sis." I said, as I set my alarm clock next to my bed. I turned to get into my bed, and I looked out the window. I screamed so loud that Mom, Dad, and Molly came running into my room, to see what it was. But the man was gone before they got there.
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Post by Shell on Apr 10, 2006 2:10:36 GMT
Oh wow! Poor kid!
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Post by ~!_Broken_!~ on Apr 10, 2006 21:00:55 GMT
"Alisha what is it! What did you see, honey?" Chase asked loudly, shaking Alisha's body to focus on the question. "A-a-that man! Morvin. Marvin. I can't remember his name daddy!" She said, bursting into tears. I hugged her and telling her to calm down and it was okay. "I'll go check it out, you three stay here," ordered Chase. ------------------- Chase POV:I ran downstairs, and grabbed my gun from behind the staircase, then headed outside. I looked on the side of the house with Alisha's window. Nothing. I ran to the other side, and bumped right into the culprit. He tried to get away from me but I attacked him, he turned out to be stronger and more agile than myself. As I regained myself, I looked for my weapon, only to find it cocked and pressed against my temple. ------------------- All three of us jumped at the sound of Chase's gun going off, and I relaxed slightly. Chase showed me he was very knowlegable about how to handle his weapon. I couldn't help but hope dearly that the man he shot was Moros. I wanted him out of my life, and no longer bothering my family, but when Chase didn't come back inside I started to panic. "Molly, Alisha, I want you two to stay in here and don't come out until I come back okay?" I told them. "Okay, Mommy," they said. I left their room and closed the door behind me. I slowly walked down the stairs into the living room. "Chase? You there sweetheart?" I asked the dark room. No answer. I headed outside and walked around the house, only to find Chase lying on the ground in a pool of blood. "Oh my God, Chase! No!" I screamed and shook him, "Please Chase wake up! Please! Oh God, please let him wake up!" I started crying. "You were serious weren't you?" Moros asked from behind me. "Of course I was serious you, asshole! I love my family! And you've destroyed it!" I got up and yelled at him, my voice full of rage. "I didn't know, Holidaye. You told me the same thing when I first helped you, how was I to know? I'm sorry, Holidaye." "You're sorry? YOU'RE SORRY!" I screamed as I hit him. He put his hands up to block himself, when he did I grabbed the gun-Chase's gun-from his belt. I didn't think, I just raised the gun and shot Moros LeVan in the neck. ------------------------------- Note: Although chase is asleep in the picture, he really did die in my game. Drowned
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Post by DejAng3l on Apr 10, 2006 23:45:11 GMT
*sobs my eyes out*.........awwww.......how sad.......it's just terrible that holidaye loss chase........*sniff, sniff*.........also just read the last couple of updates......her family was horrible.....no wonder she killed them......never expected it to be that horrible........gosh darn it broken.....you're an amazing writer..........can't wait for the next update.......really want to know what's gonna happen now......espeically since holidaye shot Moros.......
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Post by wizzy853 on Apr 11, 2006 0:09:24 GMT
Oh man! He died! *crys* I need a tissue. *blows nose*
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Post by ProLoser on Apr 11, 2006 0:20:35 GMT
Thank god that Moros guy is gone though! So sad about Chase though...and Holidaye having to raise the two little girls by herself now...
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Post by Shell on Apr 11, 2006 0:59:34 GMT
OH NO...Broken i can't belive Chase died. Great update ..but dam you *lol*
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Post by ~!_Broken_!~ on Apr 11, 2006 1:22:37 GMT
You know you love me! But I'm sad about Chase, cause I had my story going in a completely different direction and then he decides to get into a pool without any dang ladders!
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Post by ~!_Broken_!~ on Apr 12, 2006 22:13:47 GMT
Sorry, No pics for this update. It's also the final update for Holidaye. I'll update my story again when I reach generation 20. Hope you enjoyed the story... ------------------------------------------------- I sat in the courtroom, starring at the judge, waiting to hear his decision. I didn't care what happend to me, I was more worried about my girls. When Alisha turned into a teenager I appointed her as the legal guardian of Molly. "On the first charge of murder in the first degree, I find you...Not guilty, due to temporary insanity." I sighed heavily, but it wasn't over yet. "On the second charge of murder in the first degree, I find you...Not guilty, due to self defense. You are free to go, Mrs. Hamilton. Court ajourned." We rose as the judge left the courtroom, then I broke down in a heavy sob. I couldn't believe what had just happend, I killed all those people, just becuase of what my parents had done to me. I drove home thinking about everything that had happend. From the point of shooting Moros, up until a few hours ago where I was found "Not guilty" for all the charges. My neighbor heard the first gunshot when Moros killed Chase, they had called the police, and soon as I shot Moros, they pulled up infront of the house. Before asking for an explanation they read me my rights and pulled me away. Once in jail I told my lawyer everything I had told Chase, she reassured me that I'd most likely get off on an insanity and self-defense plea. She also stated that she was looking after the girls until Alisha turned of age to watch Molly. They were fine, but Molly had yet to grasp what had happend to Chase, and Alisha was never happy, she was always fighting with Molly. I pulled into the driveway and looked at my house. It seemed so big and empty now that Chase was gone. As I got out of the car I was greeted by a big hug by Molly, and then Alisha. "Where's Daddy?" Asked Molly. I started to cry. "What's wrong Mommy?" "Sweetheart, Daddy...he isn't comming home." I said through my tears. "Why, are you two going through a divorce?" "No. I loved Daddy very, very much. Do you remember that night Alisha saw something in her bedroom window, and all three of us went running to her?" "Yeah, Daddy went outside to look around. But he never came back in." "Do you remember the first big boom?" "Yes." "That was from a man shooting Daddy. He, didn't make it sweetheart." There was a long silence. "Molly, do you understand what I just said?" I asked. "Yes, Mommy; daddy's dead. Alisha even explained it to me, but I didn't believe her." "I'm sorry sweetheart, if I could've stopped it I would have." "But you did Mom. You killed that bastard who tried to hurt us and who also killed Dad," screached Alisha. "Please don't use that language, and I did stop him, but I didn't stop him from killing your father. Each time I go back through what happend that night, I stop your father from going outside, and I tell him to stay with you girls. I'm the one who ends up dead. I don't deserve to live and watch you two grow up," I started to cry again. "This mess was all because of me, when Molly grew into a toddler, I couldn't help but love her a little more because she was carrying on the family tree. I'm sorry Alisha." "Stop it! You do deserve to watch us grow up! You're as good of a parent as Dad was! And as for loving Molly more than me, oh well. It's expected because she's the one carrying our family on, I'm sure it'd be the same way if I were the one to carry the family on and not her. It's fine, Mom. I promise...We'll be fine," with that Alisha hugged me, and it was over. I loved my girls equaly: I won't have to worry about Moros anymore. Maybe now, I can properly mourn Chase, and we can move on with our lives.
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Post by wizzy853 on Apr 12, 2006 22:55:49 GMT
"But you did Mom. You killed that bastard who tried to hurt us and who also killed Dad," screached Alisha
Lol.... Alisha has a bad mouth.. use soap.... it works! :wink:
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Post by Shell on Apr 13, 2006 0:33:31 GMT
Great update broken ..about time to! (jk) But *taps foot* where are the pics?? *lol*
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Post by ~!_Broken_!~ on Apr 13, 2006 2:38:42 GMT
there wont be any pics as i stated at the beginnin of the post
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Post by Shell on Apr 13, 2006 2:51:28 GMT
it was worth a try *LOL*
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Post by Dizzy on Apr 13, 2006 2:55:18 GMT
Wow! that was a great update! You're going to generation 20!! WOW! You are better than me! I have yet to get past the second generation!
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Post by DejAng3l on Apr 13, 2006 7:23:16 GMT
Great update broken........i too applaude your commitment and dedication to your legacy......i got halfway through generation 3 and got bored with my family.........then my computer crash and i lost most of stuff so i just gave up on them.........
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Post by ~!_Broken_!~ on Apr 13, 2006 12:02:54 GMT
Only reason I can get so far is because well my life out here is nothing lol. For entertainment we watch the cows graze But I'm lookin for a job (no luck) and if I find one, I most likely won't play as much. Glad ya'll enjoyed it, I'm sorry i'm going to gen 20 before writing again, I just need to take a writing break, like becka said to me once, "I never seem to just play it anymore" and that's whats goin on with me. I miss just playin the game. I will update the family tree and a few pics from each generation. Molly married Vince Walter (the private school guy) and a baby is on the way
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Post by Shell on Apr 13, 2006 12:21:10 GMT
quot;I never seem to just play it anymore Ditto...Its the story sucking vampires that stop that *lol joking kids..but i am the same broken :phew:
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